{"id":686,"date":"2020-04-16T15:48:56","date_gmt":"2020-04-16T19:48:56","guid":{"rendered":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/?p=686"},"modified":"2020-04-16T23:52:29","modified_gmt":"2020-04-17T03:52:29","slug":"aadhya-ramineni-team-value-drawing","status":"publish","type":"post","link":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/aadhya-ramineni-team-value-drawing\/","title":{"rendered":"Aadhya Ramineni Team Value Drawing"},"content":{"rendered":"<p><a href=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-scaled.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-690\" src=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-scaled.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"2007\" height=\"2560\" srcset=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-scaled.jpg 2007w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-235x300.jpg 235w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-803x1024.jpg 803w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-768x980.jpg 768w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-1204x1536.jpg 1204w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-1606x2048.jpg 1606w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/D16CA63A-713D-483E-98B3-DBF61B132F8C-1200x1531.jpg 1200w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 709px) 85vw, (max-width: 909px) 67vw, (max-width: 1362px) 62vw, 840px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Like the other pencil drawing, your strokes in this one should be much gentler and more tempered. These would be great for the ink drawing but the pencil drawing requires a more refined technique. That can still be accomplished here as described in my notes for the other pencil drawing. The light grey values here are darker still. Once again, compare them to the white of the paper. There&#8217;s no value in the reference\u00a0 that approaches the whiteness of the border.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-scaled.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-687\" src=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-scaled.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"1963\" height=\"2560\" srcset=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-scaled.jpg 1963w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-230x300.jpg 230w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-785x1024.jpg 785w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-768x1002.jpg 768w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-1178x1536.jpg 1178w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-1570x2048.jpg 1570w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0908-1200x1565.jpg 1200w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 709px) 85vw, (max-width: 909px) 67vw, (max-width: 1362px) 62vw, 840px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>Very good, but the large dark shape to the upper left is much darker. Like your other ink drawing, the freer stroke in the values doesn&#8217;t extend to the forms themselves; shapes could be tidied up, even as the hatching strokes remain freer. See the examples I sent a week ago for an example.<\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-689\" src=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"1770\" height=\"2175\" srcset=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907.jpg 1770w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907-244x300.jpg 244w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907-833x1024.jpg 833w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907-768x944.jpg 768w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907-1250x1536.jpg 1250w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907-1667x2048.jpg 1667w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0907-1200x1475.jpg 1200w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 709px) 85vw, (max-width: 909px) 67vw, (max-width: 1362px) 62vw, 840px\" \/><\/a><\/p>\n<p>&nbsp;<\/p>\n<p>As noted in my email to the class, these strokes are too forceful and untempered. The texture here should be built gradually from many layers of strokes, each lightly applied and &#8220;neutralizing&#8221; the grain in one another. This can be improved by using a very sharp point to draw into the space and gaps between the darkest strokes, to even the texture.<\/p>\n<p><a href=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909.jpg\"><img loading=\"lazy\" decoding=\"async\" class=\"alignnone size-full wp-image-688\" src=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909.jpg\" alt=\"\" width=\"1845\" height=\"2205\" srcset=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909.jpg 1845w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909-251x300.jpg 251w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909-857x1024.jpg 857w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909-768x918.jpg 768w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909-1285x1536.jpg 1285w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909-1714x2048.jpg 1714w, https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-content\/uploads\/sites\/363\/2020\/04\/IMG_0909-1200x1434.jpg 1200w\" sizes=\"auto, (max-width: 709px) 85vw, (max-width: 909px) 67vw, (max-width: 1362px) 62vw, 840px\" \/><\/a>Very good so far, but the darks need to be much darker&#8211;many more layers of scribbling. The white stripe on the lower left is a middle-grey, not white. Even with this expressionist technique you can define the edges of shapes more accurately. The hatching might be free but the forms should have as much definition as they do in the reference image.<\/p>\n","protected":false},"excerpt":{"rendered":"<p>Like the other pencil drawing, your strokes in this one should be much gentler and more tempered. These would be great for the ink drawing but the pencil drawing requires a more refined technique. That can still be accomplished here as described in my notes for the other pencil drawing. The light grey values here &hellip; <a href=\"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/aadhya-ramineni-team-value-drawing\/\" class=\"more-link\">Continue reading<span class=\"screen-reader-text\"> &#8220;Aadhya Ramineni Team Value Drawing&#8221;<\/span><\/a><\/p>\n","protected":false},"author":1002,"featured_media":0,"comment_status":"open","ping_status":"open","sticky":false,"template":"","format":"standard","meta":{"footnotes":""},"categories":[5],"tags":[],"class_list":["post-686","post","type-post","status-publish","format-standard","hentry","category-3-team-value-drawing"],"_links":{"self":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/686","targetHints":{"allow":["GET"]}}],"collection":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts"}],"about":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/types\/post"}],"author":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/users\/1002"}],"replies":[{"embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/comments?post=686"}],"version-history":[{"count":0,"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/posts\/686\/revisions"}],"wp:attachment":[{"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/media?parent=686"}],"wp:term":[{"taxonomy":"category","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/categories?post=686"},{"taxonomy":"post_tag","embeddable":true,"href":"https:\/\/courses.bowdoin.edu\/visual-arts-1101-spring-2020\/wp-json\/wp\/v2\/tags?post=686"}],"curies":[{"name":"wp","href":"https:\/\/api.w.org\/{rel}","templated":true}]}}